[Answer] Which choice BEST revises the sentence to cut down on wordiness while retaining the sentence’s meaning?

Answer: The prosecuting attorney made a note about the defendant’s anger when speaking about the victim so he could utilize it in his cross-examination.
Which choice BEST revises the sentence to cut down on wordiness while retaining the sentence’s meaning?

The last sentence from this Wikipedia page’s first paragraph “An edit marked as minor appears to the right of a lower case bolded “m” character (m) into history.” seems incorrect to me but it’s been there for a while according to the page’s history.

Reduce sentences to the essentials. Wordiness does not add credibility to Wikipedia articles. Avoid circumlocutions like “due to the fact that” in place of “because” or “at the present time” for “currently”. Ongoing events should be qualified with “as of 2021”. Wikipedia “grammar bots” will replace these types of expressions with correct wording.

Wikipedia:Writing better articles – Wikipedia

Wikipedia:Writing better articles – Wikipedia

Wikipedia:Writing better articles – Wikipedia

The best way to avoid using split infinitives is usually via a change in lexical choices. However in spoken language phonetic stresses and timing is usually all that is needed for a sentence’s actual implications to be understood.

Millennials also known as Generation Y or Gen Y are the demographic cohort following Generation X and preceding Generation Z.Researchers and popular media use the early 1980s as starting birth years and the mid-1990s to early 2000s as ending birth years with 1981 to 1996 being a widely accepted defining range for the generation. Most millennials are the children of baby boomers and early …

Medicare is a national health insurance program in the United States begun in 1965 under the Social Security Administration (SSA) and now administered by the Centers for Medicare and M…

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